Day 3 – January 3, 2014

trembling wire in space
tiny birds alight
brief interlude

then flight

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2 thoughts on “Day 3 – January 3, 2014

  1. lisa j.

    perfect! but might be even ‘perfecter’ with the addition of just one little line break and a blank line, as in:

    trembling wire in space
    tiny birds alight
    brief interlude

    then flight

    Reply

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